oh!!!that's great!!!

Homura said:
The best way Tristan, is to do this.

Outline -> Draft -> Review -> Final.

Always consider your audience, your style, structure, parallelism, and of course, sources.

If you write in first person then everything should be in first person.

Btw, you can technically sue yourself if you misquote yourself (lol, but why would you do that? haha). You can also technically plagiarize your own work if you fail to cite it properly (lol, it sounds contradictory but technically it CAN happen though). So you should always cite properly.

Other than that, if you have a rewrite of your article or something, feel free to ask me to critique.

Sure sir Homura! Malaking tulong po yan para sa akin...

Yep, also try to get Transitional verbs and phrases. That's the key into great essays and apparently articles.

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tristankhalil said:
Hello Guys!

Thanks to the help of Sir Piggy-piggy, Sir Homura and Mflyoung!

Gusto ko i-share sa inyo ang polish version para pwede nyo i-copy and paste either sa blogs or emails nyo.. Kindly give compliments lang po sa mga gumawa... Thanks

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Website Review by Tristan Khalil
URL: http://www.thedigitalpinoy.com

I assume that everyone has Google, Yahoo, Friendster and Bansalan on their bookmarks. But if you’re looking for a more educational and informative browsing experience, I suggest heading over to The Digital Pinoy.

But what exactly is The Digital Pinoy? For us to better understand what it is, let us try to see it from the eyes of one its members who goes by the name of Urahara.

“The Digital Pinoy or TDP as we call it is a virtual community that was founded by a man that goes by the avatar of “bloodredxxx”. He founded this virtual community with one goal in mind, to connect and bring together Filipinos from all over the world and from different walks of life. He envisioned that someday, through this virtual community, Filipinos will be able to connect and interact. Regardless of status, age, gender, and other obstacles that would normally hinder interaction.”

In my experience, I find TDP as a bubbling place for chatting and discussing ideas. TDP is a place to connect with my fellow Filipinos, read articles, get the hottest OPM mp3s, and discuss topics with fellow TDPers.

TDP is more than just your average forum site. Homura, a moderator of TDP, also shows another side of TDP:

“TDP for me is an ideal, an ideal that I salute. Like I said, TDP is an ideal, it’s a place where I used to enjoy and socialize in a sense, with the comfort of being distant.”

So, you may ask me, “What do I expect to find on TheDigitalPinoy.com?”

There are several interesting features in this virtual Pinoy community:

• The Digital Pinoy has ShoutLite or SL, where you can talk and mingle with other online members from all walks of life from different parts of the world. Don’t know any other TDP member? No need to worry, everybody is your friend here.
• TDP isn’t also that far behind when it comes to personalized profiles. Love Friendster? You’ll also love TDP. Post your own pictures using the Avatar frames available in the TDP Shop. Show your personal style by spicing up your profile with your own signature. Creative TDP members can also help you trick your profile out.
• Having a hard time finding the latest OPM mp3s? The always-updated TDP Linkshare offers an unending list of your favorite OPM mp3s – love songs, soundtracks, full albums – you’ll find them all there.
• Last but not the least, of course, is the forum. A wide variety of threads flood the TDP. The computer savvy member will enjoy threads in the Computer and Technology Section, while one can discuss just about anything and everything under the sun in the “Let’s Talk” section. Whatever suits you, it’s there.

To top it all off, membership is free! It doesn’t get any better than this, does it?

So, I am inviting you to join me here in TDP!

Here's the link: www.thedigitalpinoy.com/?ref=88

I suggest that you use the link above so that I can trace you and help you in any way I can if ever you have any queries about the site... :)

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By the way, inedit/dinelete ko na po yung unang post ko (original) at pinalitan ko na po ng polished version para hindi kayo malito...

this mean so much

Hello Guys,

here is the scanned copy of my article in our school pub... Nainis ako kasi inedit nila kaya may part na wrong grammar... Or maybe, pinagkasya na lang ng printing press...

heto po...

nice article dude..yeah the "here" term is redundant..a good writer uses words not that often..take it from me dude..

but its a good article..

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Nice! A good start for a career in Journalism perhaps? Well, it's the editor's call if she shortens the article or not. Still the accolade for being the writer is yours. Nice piece. Ngilngig kaayo!

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@korn09... oo nga po eh... kaso lang po, may part talaga na hindi inayos ng editor... well, wala naman talagang moderator namin dito na journalist... ang moderator kasi sa school pub namin is a graduate of B.S. in Secondary Education... May mga trainings lang siya about journalism... Pero yung student na editor namin.. Trainings lang din...

@harmsome... mao jud bai, ngilngig jud... Salamat!
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but it's good dude..i'm also a writer in our publication when i was in college..

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@Korn09

Wow! Nahiligan ko lang ang pagsusulat kasi mahilig akong magbasa.... pero I have concluded that writing is not my cup of tea...

awesome article!!!!

come on TDP!!!!

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@tristan i think i've read this in your blog. it's a v nice article indeed...i think you shouldn't use contractions (e.g. don't, isn't, etc.) and abbreviations (for that matter) when writing an article. well, that's what i've learned. hehe. good work man!

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hmmm okay to ah.... sana marami pa maging members

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Ang taray ng article may pahabol na refferal sa bandang huli. Recruitment?! lols.