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Dec 21, 2007 06:59 am   Edited : Dec 21, 2007 01:42 pm    
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I can feel your shaking hands and they're so cold
Those hands were burning with passion before
I look into your eyes but they looked away
Not like before, they stare at me as sticky as a clay

I see you smiled at me but they gone too fast
Unlike before those smiles seems to last
And I call your name but you just turned your head
Not like before those cheeks turns red

I say I love you, but you just said I love you
Unlike before, you say those words with feelings so true
I embraced you but you just wrapped your hands around me
Not like before you're hugging me lovingly

I kissed your lips but they never moved
Not like before kissing them really feels good
I held your arms but you did not held mine
Not like before you held them with a sweet smile

You call my name but it came from a stranger
Not like before i can say it came from my lover
You're beside me but you seems so far
Unlike before you're so near no matter where you are

Our flame of love is still burning
But now i can see and feel it slowly fading
And if it's true that your love for me has gone away
Then there's no more reason for me to stay


* i composed this for those who are in this situation.

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Dec 21, 2007 08:32 am    
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sir bro ...ang ganda naman ng poem na ito kaso medyo malungkot... some good things never last tlaga kaya may times na darating at darating sa ganitong sitwasyon ang bawat tao na nagmamahalan... i hope na di ito mangyari sa amin ng hubby ko... na ma-fall out of love kami sa isa't-isa...

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Dec 21, 2007 09:26 am    
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nice poem sir bro...ito na yata pinakamahirap na part ng relationship,kapag na fallout of love na ang partner mo sau...kahit anong gawin mo di mo na maibabalik kung anu ung dati nyong samahan...
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Dec 21, 2007 09:36 am    
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Aww... That's sad.
Is that for your ex?

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SOMETIMES you need to RUN to see who will FOLLOW...

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Dec 21, 2007 09:48 am    
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This is a clear indication that the man/woman has no more love for his/her partner. This is sad but true.

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Dec 21, 2007 10:17 am    
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wow, ang sakit. pero kung wala na ba talaga bakit ipipilit pa diba?mas lalo lang lalabo ang samahan. buti nang itigil na para may masalba pa at baka pwede pang maging magkaibigan..

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Dec 21, 2007 11:42 am    
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ang sakit naman nyan daddy pero maganda po.

salamat sa pag share.

oi tamaan ka hahaha..

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Dec 21, 2007 12:49 pm    
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..ang galing ng pagkacompose..

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Love is a devil. There is no evil angel but Love....

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Dec 21, 2007 01:44 pm    
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thank you very much for you appreciation . if you need a poem, just PM me and i'll try my best to compose them the soonest.

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Dec 21, 2007 01:50 pm    
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brodavid said:
* i composed this for those who are in this situation.




thanks sir for composing this for someone like me..

i really like how you do your poems..maybe i just feel how you're feeling and it made me appreciate every words in it..keep on doing such a good poem sir

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Dec 21, 2007 02:31 pm    
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Bossing ok to ah! malungkot nga lang... Some people are meant to be separated (at first) to find their own way and learn each other more... And when the right time comes; they will be bonded forever... Cheer up Bossing

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Dec 21, 2007 04:17 pm    
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kiz_me1109 said:
Aww... That's sad.
Is that for your ex?


honestly, this is not for my EX neither im in this situation right now. this poem just came into my mind and like i said...im dedicating this poem to those who are in this situation.

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Dec 21, 2007 05:11 pm    
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ang ganda nga .. hehe.. dati, malambing ngayon, wala na.. hehe..

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Dec 21, 2007 09:40 pm    
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nice..i can almost feel the desperation as i read the poem. the desperation to hold on yet shocked with realization.

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Vote fafa zaltik para sa Hot Seat!

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Dec 21, 2007 09:43 pm    
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wow. kumakapit sa puso ang dating nito bossing

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