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Jan 31, 2008 03:54 pm   Edited : Oct 12, 2009 03:56 pm    
DarkChocolat

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By: DarkChocolat(01/31/08)

As I opened my eyes, I saw someone staring at me.
With his loving gaze, admiring every inch of what he sees.
Ba-dump, ba-dump, I can clearly hear the sound
Of my heart, at that moment, started to pound.

Up and down my hand goes, as he taught me how to move.
Little wobbly step, my thin feet made to make him feel good.
I learned a lot, his gracefulness, his feelings and skills.
And we performed on the stage with people for us to cheer.

"Nothing lasts forever", I recalled reading it somewhere.
Glorious days are over and may usefulness he can't even remember.
I'm all worn out.. He is tired of dealing with me.
Now, I sunk deeper.. my body I wasn't able to see.

Yes. I am just a creation, that he once loved.
Now, I'm no more than a scrap stored in a trash bag.
Days slowly past.. another calendar has been replaced.
I longed for the moment that he will get me out of this place.

No more ba-dumping sound, there is nothing to hear.
My heart gone cold for the sadness I cannot bear.
You are my life, my happiness, my everything.
But I'm only your marionette. A piece of wood. Nothing.

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Marionette (read me...)

Jan 31, 2008 03:57 pm    
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Marionette is japanese for puppet ba???

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"I'll take your vengeance on your behalf"

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Jan 31, 2008 04:25 pm   Edited : Jan 31, 2008 04:27 pm    
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Galing!!!


hmmmm. . .

i assume . .. open ended yan . .

Hanggang hindi ka sinusunog. . .
you're still something of value. . .

^_^

marami pa pwede mangyari. . .
hantayin mo yung "fairy god-mother" mo ;)
..or isang magaling na puppeteer . .
..nga pala kusang dumadating yun...

Galing ni Ate gumawa ng poem!!
Thumbs up!!
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Jan 31, 2008 04:27 pm    
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sheeet.. galeng ruann... isa ka palang makata.. hahaha
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Jan 31, 2008 04:44 pm   Edited : Jan 31, 2008 04:46 pm    
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ayos DC galing naman ng poem mo
bigyan kita ng marionette
more! more!

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Jan 31, 2008 04:51 pm    
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wow...Straight to the bone....astig...nice piece mama DC....

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Jan 31, 2008 05:26 pm    
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danda naman ng poem mo

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Jan 31, 2008 08:20 pm    
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gandang poem eto kasing ganda ng gumawa

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Jan 31, 2008 09:29 pm    
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nothing last forever, just like the marionette that you are.. kalungkot naman ng nangyari sa iyo..

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I always arrive late at the office,
but I make up for it by leaving early..

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Jan 31, 2008 11:46 pm    
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"You are my life, my happiness, my everything.
But I'm only your marionette. A piece of wood. Nothing." - i like this part.. so emotional...

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Feb 01, 2008 05:27 am    
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galing... may talent ka dude...
keep writing pra lalo kang mahasa...
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Feb 01, 2008 06:37 am    
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pwedeng gawing kanta
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Feb 01, 2008 08:11 am    
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Thank you po sa mga nagbasa at naka appreciate . This is my first time to post a poem. Hindi ko po alam kung masusundan pa yan. Blangko kasi ako most of the time.
@Silver - marionette, not actually a jap term.. another word for puppet din yan.
@Raven - pwede po bang ikaw na lang maging "fairy god-mother" ko? at wag mo ako inaate mas matanda ka sakin! nyahaha
@dale - makata ka jan!
@scat - yihiiii.. naubos ata laman ng ulo ko.. in the next ten years pa refill so wala ng "more! more"!
@papa MM - ikaw idol ko. tenkyu po.
@tp_aries - thanks for reading. teka po DC po ako.. baka mapagkamalang si miss chocolat na naman..
@makati - okay na pong masabi na maganda si poem.. di na kasali yung gumawa
@i4icarus - sad po ba? siguro nga.
@takyo - lovester! emo na emo ba? nyahaha salamat sa pagbasa!
@mikesteel - ty dude. try ko pa makagawa.. naubusan na ako ng powers.
@titoboy - kanta po? parang and weird kung sakali man!

Thank you po ulet!!! at sa mga babasa pa po..

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Marionette (read me...)

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Feb 01, 2008 10:55 am    
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Wow talentado talaga sweetie ko! hehehe...
Si pinnochio ba yan sweetie?

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Feb 01, 2008 11:04 am    
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Beautiful.

It's sad though that some of us get so used to being manipulated, like we can't stand on our own, just like a puppet without the puppeteer.

Damn beautiful talaga.

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