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A poem i wrote sa babaeng niligawan ko noon; na girlfriend ko na ngayon; at sa hinaharap hinihiling
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Sep 16, 2008 04:28 pm Edited : Mar 10, 2009 06:03 pm

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A “Piece” From My Heart

Days of bitterness I’ve always seen
I’ll gotten fate it always seems
Amidst the sorrow I’d like to fade
Never did wish to be in happiness’ shade
Neverland: an unattainable dream
Ending hope leaving life without gleam

Kindled spirit oh thanks you came
Repose attained when I saw you flail
Inspired I am to see your grace
Such an awesome sight: the glimpse of your face
True indeed is this feeling of mine
Instantly stopping the passing of time
New horizons I’ve seen many came into view
Each one wherein I dream to be with you

Pulse of my heart now you became
Angel of mine since the moment you came
Regrets? Without! nor I see any doubt
Reaching you with my love forever I ought
Every moment with you I promise to cherish
Never ending memories forever I’d relish
As long as time would let us intertwine
So now (‘til forever) I give you this heart of mine

I Love You . . .

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When things don't go your way...
STOP complaining THINK of a solution
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A poem for a girl I truly love...

Sep 16, 2008 04:40 pm

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kilig... heheheh.. para kanino ba yan.. may bago na naman tayong poet..

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Sep 16, 2008 04:52 pm

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wow jrn_lit so nakakakilig naman your poem

i can feel na you're really so in love talaga..

pulse of my heart now you became...
angel of mine since the moment you came...
haaayz sobra romantic naman ng line na to

so swerte naman the girl...

more! more kilig moments poems please!

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ang saya saya

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Sep 16, 2008 05:12 pm

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actually her name is written on the lines going down.

thanks nga pala. though it really took the effort from me.

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When things don't go your way...
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Sep 16, 2008 05:40 pm

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thanks casSiDie for d siggy.. i owe u one

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Sep 16, 2008 05:51 pm

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really bro? pm mko if ever.

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When things don't go your way...
STOP complaining THINK of a solution
TAKE action
A poem for a girl I truly love...

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Sep 16, 2008 08:36 pm

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nakkatouch nmn ung poem m. naalala ko tuloy ung poem n pinbasa skin dati ng kakilala ko.

inspired k tlaga noh. swerter namn nung girl.

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Sep 16, 2008 08:57 pm

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wek and swet naman.... sino ba yan swerte naman ng ginawan mo ng poem

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Sep 17, 2008 08:28 am

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wow ganda ng poem inlove na inlove talaga si koya may bagong poet sa TDP

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Sep 17, 2008 03:06 pm

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Nice piece here jerick

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Sep 17, 2008 05:10 pm

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bangis ah... may plot, he he he...talagang pinag-ubusan mo ng panahon, sarap naman, kakakilig (pakigawa naman yung gf ko..MARIA THERESA ELLEONORA BUSTAMANTE QUIRINO). goodluck sa inyo pre

may kilala ako magaling mag-post ng poem dito eh, nun pala hindi naman kanya,harr harr

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Sep 18, 2008 08:27 am

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bangis ah... may plot, he he he...talagang pinag-ubusan mo ng panahon, sarap naman, kakakilig (pakigawa naman yung gf ko..MARIA THERESA ELLEONORA BUSTAMANTE QUIRINO). goodluck sa inyo pre

may kilala ako magaling mag-post ng poem dito eh, nun pala hindi naman kanya,harr harr

madugo yung name dude.

in making a poem, the inputs should come from you kasi pag iba gumawa obvious mashado lalo na pag magkakilala na talaga kayo. since she would know how you talk, how you write, how you express yourself. tsaka maganda kung andun yung love story nyo if ever.